i should be commenting on the last piece, but I came back here to bookmark, so. I really liked the progression of this, the steps that they all went through to get back to who they were, and that it was so easy for them to be together with Suzy, that she and Patrick were so similar, despite obvious changes, both physical and emotional. I loved that Suzy did things she thought she wouldn't/couldn't for Pete. I loved Andy and Joe. I loved Suzy's songs, and stupid reporters, and filming videos. Just all so very nicely done.

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Thank you for your kind words.

I usually write with one eye on the audience, so it was something of a treat to write this just for myself. I'm still surprised that other people like it too.

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