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From:[info]complications_g
Date:February 5th, 2009 08:41 am (UTC)
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I really enjoyed reading this.

The pairings were a bit all over the place and the Pete/Patrick/Andy at the end was a bit confusing, but the sex was really really hot [all of it]. What you did to Spencer made me kinda sad. ;) I don't like people to be made into villain-types as a means to get to other pairings.

I loved the QWERTY shelving system, that's really awesome.

One thing I have to say, this felt more like an original fiction story, but with band boys names rather than fanfic due to very few recognisable canon traits. When I think of the FOB boys, none of these characterisations come to mind, but nonetheless, I liked the story. The Fuck City boys were a nice touch, and Andy's comic thing, but other than that, very origic fic to me.

Also, I know you explained your reasoning for the books and authors names being altered, but it was very jarring.

Saying all that, I don't mean to be harsh, and I do really like it! :)
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From:[info]chaosmanor
Date:February 21st, 2009 06:54 pm (UTC)
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Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked the story.

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